Hello!! I am desperately trying to come up with an add to put in the Meet Me at Mikes 'Good Stuff' catalogue... This is what I have come up with so far. What do you think. Enough info? Too many pictures??
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!
Hope you are having the most fabulous weekend.
Mwah!
I think its great, pictures speak a thousand words. I have just finished our ad for Handmade Kids, ours is a bit Christmassy, nto too much though, looks like a big pressie.
ReplyDeleteI think is perfect! no changes.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures show people 'how it is'...and it looks great.
Does my comment help? ;-)
Have a nice weekend,x
Gorgeous!lots of lovely things to look at.... one question.. should you centre the text??? I am not sure but the only thing that came to mind. But completely love it, a great concept.
ReplyDeleteI think it is just perfect as is. There is plenty of info to get people hooked and then everything is there for anyone who sees it and is interested to find out more themselves.
ReplyDeletePerfect just like all you do xx
ReplyDeletelooks fantastico!! bright and gorgeous. i love it.
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Love it, you look gorgeous as do all those vintage sheets. My only thought would be to take out the bottom right pic and replace it with one of Laura from Kit and Nancy as the colours in her dress are particularly lovely and quite complimentary to all the blues/purples in this feature. Enjoy your weekend too. melx
ReplyDeleteIt's a lovely ad - I'm one of those nerds who thinks that the text looks best either left or right.
ReplyDeleteIf it were me, I'd have the picture from the top left (the blue with the birds) as the main picture - but that's just because I'm biased and it's my favourite!
As it is - it's a great ad, looks so pretty and would definitely make me look you up on the internet. (Oh wait, I'm a bit biased again there aren't I?!)
I love the pictures. Try putting the Naughty Shorts logo in the left top corner and see how that looks. People read from left to right, top of the page to the bottom. Or put it in the top middle and see how that looks. I do love your add though. It would make me check into it.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous!!! I think it suits Naughty Shorts perfectly!!! Oh,.and ironically I gave Pip your details only yesterday,..she wanted a gorgeous funky dress! Seems you guys already know each other! <3 xx
ReplyDeleteThis is tres magnifique!! It reflects who you are and what you do perfectly. Go with it!!
ReplyDeleteI love the photos and colours!
ReplyDeleteMaybe have the dress pictures dominate?
And the shop name bigger so as to be instantly readable?
But it's pretty wonderful anyway, I'd look twice!
Ooohhh I find it very hard to part with my fabric.. even the teeniest tiniest bit. Would love to win some of yours though.. :)
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